Where are you???

When I wrote my name on sand, you stopped me,

When I kept silence, you broke it,

When I felt blue, you changed my mood,

When I had no one near me, you hold my hand,

I still write my name on sand, why you don’t stop me,

I even stop talking to myself, why you don’t irritate me,

I am alone, why you are not with me….

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  1. Those were the very words I was asking my friend few days back...

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  2. well written..hope the one who left comes bak 2 u..:)

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  3. VERY WELL WRITTERN
    CHEERS KEEP IT UP
    REGARDS "CKU"
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  4. It was a nice one, dude. Was a bit morose, but i wish you don't have to go through the same phase again and the one who left you would come back to you.
    Keep writing! ;-)

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  5. good poem ..
    i usually dont read poems but that was very nice

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  6. Dude, you've been tagged in my last post...

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  7. thanks for the comments friends,

    and thanks karthik for the tag :)

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