Book Review: I'm Heartless, A real Confession (Vinit K. Bansal))
Book: I’m heartless… A
Real Confession
Author: Vinit K. Bansal
ISBN: 8183520960
Publisher: Mahaveer Publishers
Book Courtesy: Vinit K. Bansal
With the completion of my Post Graduation I completed another
book in my one-night-read manner. This time I got “I’m Heartless… A Real Confession”
by Vinit K. Bansal.
The book comes with a tagline “This is not only a story
rather it is real confession of a lover” that you can see with its cover picture
that indicates it’s not a regular love story that will end with “and they lived
happily ever after”. It a tale of a guy Viren, whom author mate in a really
strange situation where he was about to die and the Author got to know about
just a bit of his love story. Later Viren finds the author trustworthy and ask
him to write his story as novel and author did that. Story run around a post graduating
student who is, according to author, said to be a day dreamer, an egoistic, a
hopeless romantic and an attention seeker afflicted with a bizarre madness and
arrogance engulfing him. And throughout the story you can find many
places where you can feel it clearly but one thing author missed was Highly
Self Deluded mindset of Viren. He was full of I, Me, Myself behavior but found
no quality in him that can make him so dominant person and for me he was just a
regular guy. He fall in love with a girl and in the meantime several other
girls fall in love with him, but for the sake of his loyalty for his True Love,
he ignored them all, including himself. He has friends Like Max, Sunny, Freddy,
Jiya, Om and Mansi (Who later became the main lead of story) and they did their
part very well, exactly like the saying “we all are meant to do our part”.
Initial chapters are quite out of flow and as I heard earlier
that books from Mahaveer Publishers are full of spelling and grammatical
mistakes, this one too had ample of them which contributed by a fair margin in
breaking the flow here and there quite often. The flow is scattered till
chapter 8 and 9 but after chapter 10, story picked up the flow and sailed
smoothly till the end. Every chapter after chapter 9 was in correct context and
maintained the same pace with every passing chapter. Events were described in
detail and expressions were self descriptive, unlike early chapters where I
found some unnecessary detailing of expression (like and exclamation mark describes
a Shock on its own, you don’t need to express it, and similarly many expressions
are self understood).
I like the way of storytelling of Mr. Bansal, considering “I’m
Heartless” being his first novel but language needs a lot work. It’s losing
edge at many places, sometimes Start of chapter is really good but after proceeding
further it let down me. But I really liked the simplicity of language; it’s a
true I-can-read-without-dictionary language and I’m sure these grammar issues
will resolve in his next (?) for sure.
Few things I noticed were,
1. Self Contradiction: In
chapter 6, Author said Viren told everything about Pari to Mansi, but in
chapter 17, Mansi says she know nothing about Pari. How it happened?
2. Chapter 8 broke the thought flow in really bad
manner that I almost thought of leaving the book for a while and continue
reading later sometime but somehow I read it in one go.
3. Chapter 9 did nothing but felt like an attempt
to cut a few chapters by editor and say a lot many things in few pages, that
was really irritating part of the book. But later after chapter 9 flows was
smooth and just perfect.
4. Author said Viren was a poet, but no piece of
his poems can be found in the book, disappointing for me.
5. I strongly felt need of an Epilog, because I
was eager to know what is current situation.
To conclude this review I’d say, I’m heartless
is a book that you probably won’t read if you just hear its name due to
perception of just another love story, which it’s really not.
It’s a mature story and Mature because the way
characters are behaving are really appropriate for PG students. There are many
moments when you will find yourself smiling like a nut and shouting out “Damn! It’s
true!!” real loud because they are written with very keen observation. I found
some characters to exist without any need but still they coalesced in story in
a way that they don’t feel useless. Storytelling is Good, but not very good.
You can read it in very short span of time that too with least effort and after
reading you will really find the Actual meaning of its Title. Prologue provokes
to read it further but initial chapters failed to grip my mind but later as
story picked up the pace, I forgot my Coffee and was just lost in the story.
Since I don’t rate books, hence no ratings for
this book too.
Happy Reading :)
AnSh :)
Vinit bansal writes good,, i had not read the book, but had read his poems.. and this may be his first book, we should appreciate the author for his initiative,,:)
ReplyDeleteYep He does and I really appreciate that.
DeleteBut when you are a publishing a novel, few things can not be neglected.
that's what I pointed out.
Rest I liked the book :)
In fact, the few things you noticed were observed by me too, particularly the first point ... that had me go back to the earlier page or something on those lines :)) Do read my book review of the same :)) Only the other day, I had a good chat on call and then chat with the author ... a very true story that. But there is a little something you haven't observed yet buddy :))
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