Where are you???
When I wrote my name on sand, you stopped me,
When I kept silence, you broke it,
When I felt blue, you changed my mood,
When I had no one near me, you hold my hand,
I still write my name on sand, why you don’t stop me,
I even stop talking to myself, why you don’t irritate me,
I am alone, why you are not with me….
Those were the very words I was asking my friend few days back...
ReplyDeletewell written..hope the one who left comes bak 2 u..:)
ReplyDeleteVERY WELL WRITTERN
ReplyDeleteCHEERS KEEP IT UP
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Nice poem....
ReplyDeletekeep writing..
It was a nice one, dude. Was a bit morose, but i wish you don't have to go through the same phase again and the one who left you would come back to you.
ReplyDeleteKeep writing! ;-)
good poem ..
ReplyDeletei usually dont read poems but that was very nice
this is nice.. :D
ReplyDeleteVery touchy!
ReplyDeleteDude, you've been tagged in my last post...
ReplyDeletethanks for the comments friends,
ReplyDeleteand thanks karthik for the tag :)
Please also check mine...
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